
This is the other poem that came out of January O'Neill's workshop at The Sanibel Island Writer's Conference.
We were to write in description of something we found outside.
Wrapped in double metal strips
a polished twisted arrow-shaped
piece of wood
lifting,
swirling,
leaping
"Flame in Flames"
charred section,
black burn-out
sharp edges pierce the sky
It's a flame,
a dancer,
a mother twisted in grief
It rises from an X-shaped base
as if to say
"Here marks the spot
we sign our names."
Neat poem, Helen. So glad we could share January’s workshop.
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